Spirit of A Thousand Winds

Spirit of A Thousand Winds

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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my fingertips trace one hundred places on your face.............

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I thought I had told you, I have never
loved someone like this,
or felt the touch of a spirit
 like a thousand winds
 wrap around my moments in this way.

 Look me in the eye and taste the passion
 of this wine that pours from my heart.
 You will then know the chemistry
that makes up the rhythm of truth
 in these words I speak to you.

 Listen to how much easier the rain falls
 because we hear calmer waters
when we sail on the river
of our sweetest emotions.    

I thought you knew how I dream
of drawing the curtains of love’s intoxication
 across our windows
and calling off our search for different skies.
 I was sure you understood
 how my fingertips trace one hundred places
 on your face that I love more each time
 I seek them out with my eyes.  

I thought I had told you,
I have never loved someone like this,
but perhaps I merely spoke these words in my mind.
 So I tell you now, I speak them aloud,
 to let there be no questions
 running in the meadow of everything we feel.
 I have never loved anyone
as I love you.  

Take my hand
and let’s draw the curtains
 of love’s intoxication across our windows.
  Let us shut out the world
 and sail on the river of our sweetest emotions.
 I will trace those places on your face
 that I adore with all I am.
 Come wrap me in your spirit
 of a thousand winds.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist - Ekaterina Zagustina (Katja Faith)

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The title alone caught my attention...
My so much to say about this, and all I can say is, I am in awe...such beauty pours from the soul...magnificent! Outstanding and going to my favs!!!
Poetry that takes your breath away...Neva that is your writing!!!

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Neva...this is simply stunning - you have created a canvas and painted loves passion with the words..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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passion....phew!...overwhelming poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Each word is a petal drifting soul to soul in the "Thousand Winds". A stunning beauty, with brilliant meaning behind it~

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Damn stunning.

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Ahhh the poets mind and torment, on show in this write Neva, sometimes we must put down our quill and confront our afflictions, although if we did that there would be no prose...... or would we lament elsewhere???

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is a great poem and I love the use of all the water details in the this poem. Love should be fluid and with the descriptions you placed in this piece it is smooth and beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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That's a beautiful spirit I can't even begin to comprehend! Beautiful work on the poem--it's almost like I can hear the lady saying these words a half-inch from my ear, feel her breath on my face. This is a gorgeous poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A thousand winds carrying a thousand expressions of love.
This was beautiful. You capture the quintessence of passion.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Neva this is profound, it captured my soul, absolutely beautiful, well done my dear...exceptional.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is so gorgeous! Everything about this poem is truly beautiful, every line on it's own could make an outstanding poem. This is wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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