While You Held My Heart

While You Held My Heart

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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To hear you call me a creature over-flowing with soft sounds...................

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Last night you rocked me to sleep
while you held my heart.
You took your place,
looked upon my faded seas,
renewed my thirst for life.
Within all sounds sublime
and oh so sweet
your voice fills the eyes
of my night.
I am turned to take and take
each move of love
you lay
at my feet
never forgetting
a single line
in my hunger.

To hear you call me a creature
over-flowing
with soft sounds
makes me want to let them continue
gliding from my mouth
forevermore.
They tumble as ocean waves
of thought
from my heart and soul
becoming the stars of
heaven’s floor.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist * Arthur Braginsky

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I find it impressive how you can zoom in on the tiniest fraction of a second and paint a portrait with every detail of that moment. I love the way you make time stand still. Another one of your many talents. For me, it stood out the most.
This is touching work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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gentle sweet intimate....good work

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now this is awsome

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your softly spoken romantic poetics never disappoint .. beautiful , always

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely and heartfelt as always.
You a forever breathe new life
into me with your words xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To be held by one who absorb our pains, trust springs to mind Neva

As always beautifully spun words

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

the story you paint on this poem is truly beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed reading this! It had so much passion all wrapped up in a little box with a bow on top. ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amazing and beautiful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh, Neva, darling.
Your words are luscious and your emotions even more so.
Your love seems as easy and open as your words .
I adore your writes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words were beautiful and gentle. I enjoy reading your poetry of love. Honest and beautiful words create a vision of love and peace. A very strong ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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