Let Us Always

Let us not care when our lips rain sounds
that revolve around dreams
where our strength
requires effort in saying
I love you.

In those times when our faces prepare
for answers when we are all alone
let us somehow
be brought together,
holding hands, down on our knees.

Let us allow our fingers to run away
into the clear waters
of the language of our hearts
until we are lifted up
and refreshed anew.

Let our hearts always skip a beat
at the sight of the other
and our bodies
sway towards one another to bring
comfort into our lives.

Let us always dry each other's tears
and send the pain
we see in the other's eyes
into the arms that wait
to crush its very air.

Author's Note

Artist *Pavel Bergr

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Oh my the last stanza is a killer, crush the very air - this adds a pain to the ending for those that have yet to taste the truth of love, not the phyiscal touch but more the mental inner comfort that when two hearts attuned can speak to one another with just a glance or gesture.
Beautifully penned, keep em coming

[Zane Mathias]

so this is the first poem that I have read on here in 4 months and i am very Hapy it was! Great write, i fell in love with the flow of this and looking forward to reading more for you!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Zane :)

[Cassie Fraga]

very strong with living in love!!! something that is not easy to do, but when its REAL and you embrace the one you want keep them warm inside your heart... n e thing is possible!! thank you for the sharing Neva!!! that was beautiful!!

[realmwriter]

this is really good, I love the motivational motif. The pacing is perfect too.

[Teri B]

A prayer many of us have prayed at one time or another. If only, eh? A well-constructed poem about dreams of forever love! Very touching!

[Birdman313]

another awesome poem

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is many things. You touched most of the poem. Take two strong people to maintain a lifetime love. I like the desire and the powerful ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Neva, you've gone and done it again! This is priceless work of art. Each stanza is my favorite. It told a perfect love story of being there for each other! I'll say it again your very talented.

100/100

[KAREN]

You always come up with the most awesome lines in your poems, and this one is no different. Excellent work here!
100/100

[Rene Velez]

beautiful...