My Heart Speaks Your Language

My Heart Speaks Your Language

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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When you close your eyes do you know what is dawning as a torchlight on the silver glass of your soul?

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When you close your eyes
do you know
what is dawning
as a torchlight on the silver glass
of your soul?
Does your heart like mine
throb with words
crying out to breathe life
into the darkness of your world
and for once,
be understood by all?

If our words could stand up
and dance in the light
of a moon shining on love
they could be loud enough
for others to learn.
Until everything said
played out in a scene of seconds
full of trust, never ending
or needing
to be discerned.

My heart speaks the language
that your heart understands.
Our thoughts
are one and the same.
Your heart too,
speaks the language 

my heart understands.
Each of our words
cries out to breathe life
into the darkness,
oh......
if only they could dance.


© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
For my dear friend in India Maini Sk I generally am known to write poems of romance. Not this one...this is about the universal language of love and trust and peace that is in all the hearts of mankind. If we only try to listen to one another perhaps our words will dance.

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They do dance. They dance in shimmering light of clarity written in your poetry. How nice it is to be understood and to understand :) Gorgeous poetry


Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful. Just beautiful.
And I like the photo too, I'm going to steal it :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Fabulous! I really like. Uplifting! Thanks.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And your words do dance my friend.....Bravo.....Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is the kind of love poem everybody should read. This is a universal truth.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has beautiful thoughts .. I don't feel a flow, as Chris said he did .. But still I like the ideas you bring to light ..

Jasmine .. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"if only they could dance" - perfect ending to a perfect poem!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your point comes across loud and clear; I was happy to see after reading your author's note that this is exactly what I was thinking! Only you make words sound so lyrical, but in plainspeak, if that makes sense. Your words are never overdone. Simply lovely!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 20, 2012
Last Updated on March 20, 2012
Tags: language, heart, soul, words, dance, light, darkness

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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