I look down at my feet and wonder if they even remember where they have run........
Sometimes the unseen embraces all I know while my skin burns from the tears of angels falling continuously as they face the darkness of voices speaking within my heart. I get lost inside of my emotions and find I've become devoted to screaming winds that given precious time could tear me apart.
I look down at my feet and wonder if they even remember where they have run and if anyone knows of their regrets after splashing through the puddles my passion led them into. And it seems even if I place both feet together I'm still bound to face that old mirror when the stitches of my life come unglued.
Exciting. Full of strong visuals and actions that any reader can relate too. Without giving direction for emotion, your feelings bleed through infecting the reader in the most wonderful way.
An intricate web our emotions weave...
Another wonderful writing that speaks of those dark corners of sadness.
You've captured the essence of when we've fallen into the depths of a suffocating emotional roller coaster and realize there is no good going to come of it...
" I get lost inside of my emotions
and find I've become devoted
to screaming winds
that given precious time
could tear me apart."
finding our footing again is hard work, but something we must do to save ourselves from becoming lost within our own mind and heart.
And when you promise the mirror not to splash into any more puddles, your feet will turn you away from that image, until, now you are refreshed, a passing strange car will drive the puddle water and soak you.
Great images.Great rhythm. Great sadness.
ATB
Alex.
Such a precarious place, "...and I find I have become devoted to the screaming winds, that given precious time could tear me apart." Poignant and haunting like the songs I shouldn't play over and over again as my heart bleeds out, but am hard pressed to stop the music. You move me to think, feel, and take another step forward.
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