Is It Wrong?

Is it wrong to hide so much pain?
Is it wrong to feel slightly insane?
Is it wrong to do so much deeds?
Is it wrong to expect little needs?

Is it wrong to work hard but move slowly?
Is it wrong to be happy, but not for me?
Is it wrong to feel depress deep within?
Is it wrong to say more you can imagine?

Is it wrong to weep night and day?
Is it wrong to want this pain to fade away?
Is it wrong to think better off dead?
Is it wrong to have so much pain in my head?

If it is not so wrong...
Then why am I feeling weak, not strong?
Why do my days seem so long?
When will this feeling be gone???

Reviews

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

I can identify very strongly with this poem, particularly the second stanza. It is a horrible feeling to seem to be going nowhere no matter how hard you try even though it is said hard work always pays off.

[Kate Henderson]

Lovely writing, I feel like I can relate. Great work!

[CharM105]

Thanks so much!

[Seeker]

Yes, it's not wrong :'(
How I wish my feeling's gone too..
#Relate here ^_^

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

sad little peace so full off emotion. Sounds like you need someone to talk to. Just to let you know im only a message away if you do. Great poem you have so much talent keep writing :)

[CharM105]

thanks --- this was one of my old poems i found...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

well i really enjoyed it great write once again :)