Lipstick stains...

A Senryu.

Tracing lipstick stains;
The clarity of a kiss
left on his collar...

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very Romantic well that's all I can say lot of romance.


I also do Romance I am a Hopeless Romantic
But lot of it I do try to keep it G rated more love and passion.


but the Lipstick stains on the shirt was interesting.




Now was this Fictional or where you thinking
of a Special someone that your heart belongs to just Curious?

Thank you for sharing very nicely penned.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Chris Micha]

Just curious what color was the lipstick? There's only one right answer. :)

[Quill~]

is that trick question? lol
whatever color it is, spells "trouble". ;)
thanks Christian. :)

[Chris Micha]

Noooo...you can't leave it unanswered ;)

[Quill~]

No?........

[Chris Micha]

Yes, no.....

Wait, how did this get turned back at me as a question? You're sly!

[Quill~]

if you're going to say "no", then be firm... you may get what you want. lol

[Chris Micha]

There's only so much emphasis that can be put on the work "NO" in cyberland. ;)

The right answer btw was pink.

[Quill~]

funny, pink is favorite color... and "NO", is my favorite dirty word. (but don't tell anyone) ;)

[Chris Micha]

Lips zipped sealed signed and delivered.

[Quill~]

put a stamp on it and send it to me. :)

[Chris Micha]

Done! It's on the way.

[Quill~]

oh goody! :))

[David Scott]

How did you get a picture of my high school prom night? ;)
Those lovely bothersome stains...
Don't know weather to love em or hate em.
Staying in character well with this write.

[Quill~]

Ha ha! You caught me... I stole it! ;)
we tend to share a liking to lipstick, whether it's on the lips or not.
It makes for a nice souvenir don't you think? :)

[Quill~]

oh forgot to "thank you"... so, thanks darlin'. :)

[Shaquana Adams]

This is so sensually sweet and the picture really pulls it together. ^-^ Good job!
-QuanaWana

[Quill~]

:) thank you kindly, Shaquana!

[krish]

Lol, don't you think if a man takes a keepsake of Kiss from a Beautiful Red Miss.. Lol on a collar and if a man's married then i think when he'll go home ... you can make a situation of Divorce if his wife see that red mark of lips on his collar... !!!!!
Hahaha .. Lol, i was damn chuckling when i was reading your short poem...lol It's a real write, My dearest, Quill, you're awesome and always come up with such a nice and good realistic pieces... that's always written from your heart. :) I enjoyed reading the piece..
Hey, by the way, who was that pretty girl who gave her red mark from lips on his collar, Omg, was that you ? LOL hahahah

[Peter H]

hmmmmmmm sensual and soft . tells a much deeper story of an affair between them though .

[Quill~]

:) that it does... thanks Peter!

[OBWhiteHawk]

Sweet. I love lipstick stains, the story they tell and memories they bring!

[Quill~]

:) it's a telling story for sure! thank you OB!

[Jack V.]

I could just stay on this page and look at your poem all day. Well done... and the writing is superb as well.

[Quill~]

:) thanks, glad you enjoyed!

[Keith LaFountaine]

Excellent use of subtext. Great work! :)

[Quill~]

:) thank you muchly Keith!