Forever

Forever

A Poem by Lyingwithlions

Daydreaming behind closed eyes
Awake In a darkness so vast
Mirroring the universe so wide. 

Inside something resembling nothing 
Where infinite sparks begin to rise 
In the expanding distant
A light softly shines. 

Realizing in this instance 
I'm Witnessing the birth of time 
Within each sigh I find 
A moment brand new 
Before each breath. 

To be shared with you 
Who is one of a kind 
That this day has never existed 
It's existing now as we glide 
Into the expanding unknown. 

 As it has
 As it will
 Either shared or alone. 

Reaching out to grasp a hold of life 
For In each new second shown.
 
Every minute 
Every hour 
Every day 
Into weeks 
Into months 
Into years 
For as long, 
As long is FOREVER 
We have let it slip away.


© 2015 Lyingwithlions



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Very nice. I love the startling consciousness of existence and unfolding of time:

"Realizing in this instance
I'm Witnessing the birth of time"

And yes, as easily as it is born, it slips away and has done so since the begining.

Greatly enjoyed.

Rick

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyingwithlions

2 Years Ago

Yes it has. Thank you for viewing.



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Very good ! How many things are born with time including time itself. I liked this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Interesting prospective, witnessing the birth of time. Going to have to store this idea and let it build into an inspiration to write about myself. So thank you for inviting me, good read :~)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyingwithlions

2 Years Ago

You are welcome, and thank you for the review and comment. Also the email is very much appreciated.
This is great! It is hard to imagine something like this, to explain anything related with space and time, and to put it into words is even more difficult.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyingwithlions

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review and comment. :) I love writing about the moment, brand new.
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Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

And I hope you do, I'd love to read it.
Very nice. I love the startling consciousness of existence and unfolding of time:

"Realizing in this instance
I'm Witnessing the birth of time"

And yes, as easily as it is born, it slips away and has done so since the begining.

Greatly enjoyed.

Rick

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyingwithlions

2 Years Ago

Yes it has. Thank you for viewing.
This is simply beautiful. Your gentle words flow across the page leaving the reader feeling that almost anything is possible. I have always found time to be relative and when in love, there is never enough of it :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyingwithlions

2 Years Ago

I couldn't agree more. Thank you so much!!
To daydream, the possibilities are endless but bringing them to life... That's the tricky part.
Really liked this one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyingwithlions

2 Years Ago

Happy you liked it. Thank you. And yes, very tricky. I'm still trying to figure out how to balance t.. read more
So beautiful, you really have a way with words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyingwithlions

2 Years Ago

Thank you. :)

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Added on August 12, 2015
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