Completely

Completely

A Poem by Chellie
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An Autumn photoshoot for a happy couple

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Leaves fall from the trees

A brilliant swirl of colors

As the smell of fall

Fills the air around us

 

We are lying on the ground

Engulfed in the leaves

Kissing softly

Holding each other tightly

 

A camera shutter

Sounds all around us

Capturing this moment

Our everlasting love

 

We pay them no mind

Lost in each other

Lost in your eyes

In your hand on my chest

 

I am filled with your love

From your smile

Your touch

Your smell

 

You take over me completely

With your smooth skin

And your all knowing eyes

That see my very soul

 

I can’t stop myself

As the breeze blows softly

To whisper in your ear

“Marry Me”

 

And the camera’s shutter

Goes crazy at my words

Forever capturing

This moment in time


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© 2017 Chellie


Author's Note

Chellie
Something sweet for you guys. Hope you enjoy it. I love this time of year when it gets cold and you can start wearing sweaters. I love the colors, the smells, the atmosphere. The holidays are something I am dreading this year, but I can't stop myself from loving the world around me even if I don't want to right now.

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I really liked this. It was vivid in its detail. You could see the picture in your head, before you saw the picture at the end of the poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's so romantic and beautiful. Love the way you expressed the way of true love that were to become eternal. Loved it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thanks for entering this beauty into my poetry comp romantic
still judging and going through entries and writing reviews at the moment may take some time!
its awesome love th epic too

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello, Chelsea, thank you for entering my contest! :)
This is a vivid description of the moment and works well with the photo.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and hopeful words shared. Photo and words. A perfect combination. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet, I love the calm in it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chellie

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I wanted a change of pace from my usual works.

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Added on November 7, 2017
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Tags: love, romance, fall, autumn, leaf, leaves, kiss, romantic, photoshoot, photography, marriage, proposal

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Chellie
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