about who?

the last time
     your tongue touched
my ear

i listened with      
     my toes

begged my heart
     to remember

and forgot     
     everything

about you

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a brilliant write!...
I love that you did not spell it out for your reader, but rather take us on a journey...
Leading us with words strung of pearls...

Did you really forget? ;)

[ChemicalMadness]

i couldn't ever...i've tried....but the lines don't lie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

almost sounds like that "everything about you" is that you once inflicted pain upon me...but when the physical chemistry is set off...i forget all about that.

[ChemicalMadness]

interesting spin....i like it