about who?

about who?

A Poem by ChemicalMadness

the last time
     your tongue touched
my ear

i listened with      
     my toes

begged my heart
     to remember

and forgot     
     everything

about you

© 2014 ChemicalMadness



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Such a brilliant write!...
I love that you did not spell it out for your reader, but rather take us on a journey...
Leading us with words strung of pearls...

Did you really forget? ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


ChemicalMadness

3 Years Ago

i couldn't ever...i've tried....but the lines don't lie
almost sounds like that "everything about you" is that you once inflicted pain upon me...but when the physical chemistry is set off...i forget all about that.

Posted 3 Years Ago


ChemicalMadness

3 Years Ago

interesting spin....i like it

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ChemicalMadness
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Hopefully you find something in some of my words here...If not, there is beauty in the music (which is not mine, clearly). Listen....always listen. more..

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