long walk

long walk

A Poem by ChemicalMadness

december breaths
     stop short -
     shallow and frozen,
                    shattered on the ground...
          small ponds of melted intention
               abandoned
                    in puddles,
                         salt-stuck to our     
                         soles

© 2015 ChemicalMadness



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Short and sweet - just enough to create the scene and then leaves you in it. Love it! I just came back to this site after a very long hiatus - years - and I am glad I stumbled upon your work! I look forward to reading more.

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Hopefully you find something in some of my words here...If not, there is beauty in the music (which is not mine, clearly). Listen....always listen. more..

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