The Baby Shoe

The Baby Shoe

A Story by Cherrie Palmer
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one line story

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The tiny shoe in her purse brings great pain,

 as it floods her soul with memories so tender.


© 2018 Cherrie Palmer



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How can this be done....you just did it.. so few words, so much said and so much emotion...... 10/10.... N x

Posted 1 Month Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Month Ago

:) thank you Neville. I enjoy the one line challenge. Makes me think of a great opening line of a st.. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

that is an understatement if ever there was Cherrie.... N
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mou
one day my grandma had shown me a cute dress of a 3 to 4 month baby and later I came to know that It belonged to my father.. but here I could realize that sentiment

Posted 3 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

3 Months Ago

thank you so very much, for the review and sharing that with us.
mou

3 Months Ago

my pleasure
A very sad story dear Cherrie. I have saved my children baby shoes and my grandchildren baby shoes. You left the reader with sadness and question. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Yikes. Yeah, I think I know that feeling. Hopefully, this story ends up being a happy one.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Months Ago

hello Sam :) and good morning.

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Added on August 29, 2017
Last Updated on January 19, 2018
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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Bull Shoals Lake, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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