alone

alone

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
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senryu

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wild heart races free

carved names slowly fade away

as love promised dies

© 2018 Cherrie Palmer



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When less is more
senryu rules
pen runs dry with applause

All Good Things Cherrie....Neville


Posted 6 Months Ago


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mou
wild heart! it loves with gentle unforgettable spark..once left, has no mercy..those golden moments fade away like a foot step on the sea sand..a short but enriched with strong feelings..I just love it
mou.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

Thank you Mou i look forward to returning the review
mou

6 Months Ago

my pleasure
Sometimes alone is the best place to be - wild and free🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh dear the promises that didn’t come to be- but I do believevwhen things like this happen then something better is in its way- the meantvto be, beautiful and touching - enjoyed reading 🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh i like the opening line...after loving and being betrayed what better thing than to be wildly free as the memories fade .. nice job! wonderful hope in this senryu ..at least that's how i read it ;) i suppose it could be the wild heart going into the relationship too...but i like my interpretation better :)))))
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

i like your interpretation better as well :)
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

:) .....................
Been on the decimated end of a wild heart... there are no emoticons to describe the feeling... enjoyed

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

yes, i guess most everyone old enough to partake has.
This it says everything about a relationship when it ends.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

Thank you Robin. And welcome aboard:)
Memory fades.. but there in places of the heart
sweet days live forever
promises made, then broken
leave a damaged life
and longings give way
to an unending demise ...

I can relate.........

Jazzy


Posted 6 Months Ago


This is sad,true and short. I loved the way you got the point and they way you worded it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

thank you Desiree, i look forward to returning the review. :)
Desiree O'Neal

6 Months Ago

:) I look forward as well.
A few words to read something so sad. Bravo to your senryu

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago


I love making these, it's a little work but the flow it creates, will carry itself. :) glad .. read more

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Bull Shoals Lake, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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