Gosh, Cherrie!
Such poignancy from one so tenderly affectionate and gentle in her nature, sure does reach right in and grab the heart in a stirring grip.
I know you've an endless imagination, Hon, but this one feels so genuine … yet, I suppose excellently rendered, highly creative poetry is supposed to have an intended effect on its readers.
It is rare one comes across such a powerfully impacting Senryu, Cherrie … especially, in perfection of count, form, emotional timbre, and such a deeply captivating poetic voice.
So sad to see good love go bad, Cherrie … hugs to thee! ⁓ Richard ;/
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I like to mix it up and try not to write the same thing over and over again. Your generous words we.. read moreI like to mix it up and try not to write the same thing over and over again. Your generous words were very kind.
wow...yes, and one day someone will see those barely visible initials carved into that tree and ponder who put them there and whether they are still together...well done senryu...
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I am a published poet and love poetry. I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: Obsession Starts.. more..