Come On Let's Dance

Come On Let's Dance

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
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some elder-something fun

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I love to watch you move
see your swagger
you've never lost your groove
Baby, I loved you then
Still love you now.
Come on baby let's dance.

What

You've thrown your hip out.
Sure, I'll get the door.

© 2018 Cherrie Palmer



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Cherrie Palmer
more humor

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haaaa! YOU are really good, You made me smile WIDE.. lol but still it's a sad truth..., what's more beautiful than to still love the same, whatever comes, whatever happens, how beautiful it is to see two elders still holding their hands gently, passionately... oh my wide smile becoming unexpectedly gentle tears now...

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

8 Months Ago

thank you :) yes it is that sad funny truth of aging.



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Very accurate Cherrie, i can relate to this but just have'nt put the hip out yet...i was a punk in my day and when the notion is in, i still like to crazy dance but age is chasing me now...lol

Posted 7 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

7 Months Ago

Time has an unfair advantage
Gonz

7 Months Ago

True....unfortunately
Went to the half term disco two weeks ago; (helping out only.) Charlie my son is eleven going on twelve and the way he and the rest of the kids threw themselves around made me feel quite dizzy; though I confess, I much prefer a slow, slow, quick quick slow dance nowadays. :))

Fun poem, thanks.

Beccy.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

7 Months Ago

Pre-teen what fun. I remember the kids at 11/12. They are a silly good time.
Hilarious & playful & affectionate! You have a loving way of spoofing life's curses in a realistic way. Just this one little glimpse says so much about how an old couple gets thru their days, darting in & out of fantasy & reality! *wink! wink!* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


haaaa! YOU are really good, You made me smile WIDE.. lol but still it's a sad truth..., what's more beautiful than to still love the same, whatever comes, whatever happens, how beautiful it is to see two elders still holding their hands gently, passionately... oh my wide smile becoming unexpectedly gentle tears now...

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

8 Months Ago

thank you :) yes it is that sad funny truth of aging.
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Gee
Lol, that's me. I moan every time I move. Me getting out of a chair sounds like a scene from Harry met Sally

Posted 8 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

8 Months Ago

yes me too, I do yoga twice a day to keep everything moving in the right direction. It's dangerous g.. read more
quite some funniest words u have come up with. liked the way how humorously u write this stuff. very intriguing! looking forward to check out ur stuffs, shortly.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Love it, thanks for this afternoon smile!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

9 Months Ago

You bet anytime :)
A sweet, fun dance across time, carrying us all into the loving days ahead. May we all find a way to keep dancing even when knees and hips are added on later!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

9 Months Ago

Thank you, it was fun to write
Cherrie, you got me! I didn't see past the first stanza. Then, your "what" and I laughed at the last two lines. I'll be fifty this year, so I guess I can laugh now. Might be my future soon. Thanks for the laugh.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

9 Months Ago

Well at almost 54 I must say I too find it funny
I like your humor. That is probably why men past a certain age say that dancing is for sissies. We're scared of what you just mentioned. CD

Posted 9 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

9 Months Ago

Lol true CD

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Bull Shoals Lake, AR



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I am a published poet and love poetry. My husband and I live near the White River, and love trout fishing. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: O.. more..

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