Mornings Secret

The sunrise

What secret
did the wind just share
to make the sun
blush so sweetly.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Cherrie!
Loving in the warmth of sunrise ⁓ what could be sweeter!

One never knows what a conspiring wind and sun will come up with, but it's sure to be something beautiful … just like your delightful Free Verse poem.
I like the flow of this, the creatively original imagery, and gently suggestive thought it invokes.
For softer, more proper grammatical appeal, consider ending with the action adverb "sweetly", rather than with the adjective "sweet … ie: "to make the sun blush so sweetly".

Whatever, I'm (obviously) smitten! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Cherrie Palmer]

Ya know Richard, I tried it both ways and need to look at it once again.
:) and thank you for the suggestion I appreciate it very much.

[Richard🖌]

I am always happy to read your poetry, Cherrie … you're such a gentle joy! : )

[Pete]

clever, effective personification. sunrise is such a special time. made me smile ... :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you, Pete so much. I like to do that when I write. Helps connect us with the moment in a fresh way.

[Patricia Wedel]

Cherrie... the wind can be gentle and tickle our fancy.
Your talent shines through like blooms bursting in spring.
truly, Pat

[Cherrie Palmer]

If that means I'm full of it I agree:)
All kidding aside thank you Pat your reviews are like a cup of cheer.

[Patricia Wedel]

You are a deer... love those little rhymes!

[john l smith]

certainly nothing to compare with morns sunlight

[Cherrie Palmer]

Ya know I always think that until it sets in a brilliantly blaze.

[john l smith]

yes, sunsets can be extremely beautiful, all the colors, like an artists rendition

[kentuck14]

Nice! Charming, but it makes me think beyond the charm . . . What secrets does nature share only among themselves . . . an insider's secret.
T.

[Cherrie Palmer]

They must have some real doozies.

[barleygirl]

This short-and-sweet poem suggests that painful brevity of a spectacular dawn moment. Things in life that are momentary can often provoke a continuing stream of thoughts & observations, just like your poem does (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Cherrie Palmer]

Oh I like that,
And great to see you back in full swing.

[barleygirl]

Thanks for the welcome back. It was a tough winter for me here, but I did alot of inner work that's proved to be fruitful! *smile*

[Cherrie Palmer]

I'm glad to hear that inner work is very rewarding. Unlike painting . I've spent a hour looking for my blue painting tape.
I found it :) it fell down between the washing machine and deep freeze. tape 0 granny 1 :)

[barleygirl]

Painting! Sounds fun! (kidding) After the uncommon rain this winter, now I've got the big weed-whacking task ahead of me!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Man, I need to hit the garden as well.
Maybe next week. Lol

[Kent Rawski]

P.s. I wonder if that old wind said if I can make you blush will you make me a tequila sunrise

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lol, I hope so what a springtime shower that would be.

[Kent Rawski]

Many things are said to come upon the wind including this delicate poem that's gracious

[Muskan]

Minimal words,yet carrying a deep meaning 😊

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Muskan.
The idea just hit me as I watched the sky change colors.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Minimalist gem.
A unique and lovely perspective, Cherrie.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Good morning Jim and thank you

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Hmmmm- those morning secrets that can be so very sweet...🌹

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you, and good morning