Four Bare Feet

love's play

bathers bubbles tickle toes,
warming steam sooths the soul,
heated lips warm and tender
lovers melt and swoon together,
lighted candles send shadows swirling,
open window keeps air whirling,
tingled breeze cools the skin,
as four bare feet nestled in
bear skin rug calls their name
flickering shadows do the same
crackling fire goes unattended
napping lovers tightly bound
enjoy the bliss they have found.

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

Mon Cherrie... you are so very bad:) I should know... I am the Bad Bunny after all:/ You know when I say Bad what I'm really saying is very good:) Yums the word!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lol, i predict, the sell of MR. BUBBLE to double.

[barleygirl]

I want to be here! And thank you for taking me there! I love how you start in the thick of it, fully engaged, immersing the reader in a playful sexy spirit right off. I love how there's much dynamic playful movement with sensations popping. Nice rhythm & occasional rhyming without being regimented about it. This really conveys a mood & a spirit of playing together (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Cherrie Palmer]

Well, your welcome

[Chris Shaw]

A beautiful romantic write of togetherness. Who can resist a bath filled with bubbles, scented candles and a flickering fire. You just reminded me of the first time my love and I shared this time together. Throw in a bottle of red and you have it all. Nice work Cherrie.

Chris

[Cherrie Palmer]

Those are great memories, youth, passion and wine...those were the days

[DIVYA]

Enjoyed reading this so much. Opens the mind to the scent, the seduction, the possibilities that beckon, in a bubble bath! Happy New Year Cherrie!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Divya

[deeps]

This is wonderful cherrie.
I enjoyed this write, lovely & cute.

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Wonderful descriptions Cherrie
Soft, and playful too. Sounds like a lovely time.
love the shower idea. lol