The Dance Of The Butterfly

10 word contest

A quick twirl  of the ball n step left me without breath.

The pattern of light in front of the window fed my imagination to create,

as I continued to sway and move with the violin.

My senses were alive while a butterfly did float by alongside my chiffon,

making me giggle with glee in the tea-room that makes my heart sing.

I laid bare my soul as I danced with all my might.

     And slumbered in restful dreams waiting for the morning light.

 

Reviews

[angelina neves]

wonderful!

[WindSong]

So soft and floating as a beautiful and mystical butterfly flitting through the air. Lovely and gracious writing!
WindSong

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awwwwww that was wonderful. Loved the imagery. I could see a woman in a chiffon gown dancing around the room while butterfly flutters by and she grins at the beauty of such a delicate creature. She dances with all her might until she tires, then sleeps and dreams waiting for the morning light.
How beautiful Cherrie

[Helena]

This is superb Cherrie! Delightful, uplifting and a wonderful use of the "Ten". Thank you so much for entering this into the contest! Helena

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So very delightful and uplifting.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and lovely!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I like it! If you dance, just as well do it with all your might.