Who am I

The rage beast lives within my breath 

lives between each breath 

exsists between , under 

my fight for freedom

My fight for freedom 

lives within my breath

in my in breath 

in my out breath 

is my breath

Rage beast tries 

to suffocate me 

my breath 

drags me down 

in to deep underground 

makes me sad 

makes me frown 

makes me feel small 

Want to break free 

but do I?

always trying to run away in a million different ways 

when it's here I need to be 

in with and just with 

my breath 

sleeping next to rage beast 

breathing rage beast 

feeling rage beast 

but feeling raped by rage beast 

dont want to make a sound now 

have no choice it feels now 

going again 

deep underground 

my life 

my breath 

my freedom 

my rage beast 

 

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Wow. I've been there, and I know exactly how it feels. I don't think it could have possibly been said any better. I know how negative emotions can suffocate you, especially rage. How you can feel yourself sinking
...down....down..down.. like you are in a coffin being lowered into the ground, which is exactly what the near to the end to end of this poem felt like. It doesn't get much better than this.