Restart my pain

Restart my pain

A Poem by Cheryl J. Turner

I can't escape your eyes when they play that song

There is power there, it sends fear down my spine

Memories live there, I don't want details

I just need time

Healing wounds is seldom speedy

Along comes another and yet I lean to you

Glutton for punishment? Shall we re-visit this crime

What a danger to be within your range

I wonder if you'd shoot...

Ceasefire 

Do you dream of me at all?

Aren't we beyond this point?

Where is my sweet recovery?

When will my pain restart?

Along comes another and so we begin again...

© 2010 Cheryl J. Turner


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A very well written piece that I find myself relating almost exactly. Similar questions I ask myself as I try to seek the answers. I think you made an excellent choice with the title and the flow to this poem goes very well. Such powerful emotions that speak volumes, thank you for sharing. --Broken Soul

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Well written, I love the imagery, especially with the questions near the end.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another sweet poem. Angst is paralyzing. Everything will be good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emotions are powerful things, and are unfortunately not ruled by reason. Even when we see the disconnect, we still try for it. This is a very well done example of that, and a very enjoyable read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very well written piece that I find myself relating almost exactly. Similar questions I ask myself as I try to seek the answers. I think you made an excellent choice with the title and the flow to this poem goes very well. Such powerful emotions that speak volumes, thank you for sharing. --Broken Soul

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was feeling this same way a few years back, we got back together to start over..... then it happened again. So now I have tucked my heart away, from the pain. It hurts to much.

I read Jeff's review and think if you change the word ' is ' to ' are' it might sound more cohesive " Healing wounds are seldom speedy". Because in reality the pain is very hard to get through.

Yet it was a heart wrenching poem, but great to read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

seriously???......been walking in my head lately???--the perfect emotions you have here of that love that we know is not good for us but has become the definition. great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like this! It had me drawn it, but then it ended too soon. It feels like there is more of it still out there somewhere.

Also, I would find a different way to say, "Healing wounds is seldom speedy" with the word speedy being the word that seems a bit out of place.

As always though, just my opinion.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 12, 2010
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Cheryl J. Turner
Cheryl J. Turner

Edinburgh, Midlothian, United Kingdom



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I am a self confessed hopeless romantic and hold not a shred of remorse for it. I love the idea of love. Writing, for me, is a release of emotion and a tool of expression. 'The aim of life is se.. more..

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