Haiku Hate

A Poem by Created Unfinished

I did this for my class. I received a 70 on it because my syllable count was all wrong. I'm posting it as is anyways because I liked it.

Constrict the words

Leave out your thoughts

Write a haiku

© 2016 Created Unfinished

Author's Note

I did this for my class. I received a 70 on it because my syllable count was all wrong. I'm posting it as is anyways because I liked it.

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Inject Positivity

Yeah I guess the syllables were short but it was good... You hit it well, this is pretty much exactly what Haiku is sometimes... I wanted to read it because I'm writing haikus now...

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

You probably know haiku is 17 syllables about nature, while senryu is 17 syllables about human nature. But there's probably some poetic form that's only 12 syllables . . . *smile*

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

a unique view toward Haiku-ish poems...

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

I don't hate them or anything. My ability to count syllables is the problem as shown by my grade on .. read more

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Added on February 19, 2016
Last Updated on February 19, 2016
Tags: poem, anger, haiku, hate, school

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Created Unfinished

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I live for the words that give my life meaning. Relationship: Taken PS4 @ Cheyzard I'm always looking to improve my writing so please comment. I will try to go through all my read requ.. more..