I'm Still Hanging On..

This poem represents my feelings towards my father, Even though he is gone. I love him and I am still hanging on.

You're nothing but a dream now.
A image, A memory.
Appearing in my head.

I wear your picture in my locket.
Around my neck it lays.
The memories burn away at bay.
When your soul lived wild,
When I was but a child.

The laughter we shared.
Back when mom really cared.
Before the dark times,
You shined like a new dime.

I'll really never forget,
So, Let me speak my goodbyes,
of my one long regret.

Reviews

[kaiti]

Awwww i wanna hug you.
It's an amazing poem and i loved how you used the bay reference.
great work....I LOVE YOU

[Julia]

Aww Fran your gonna make me cry! :[[
This is an amazing piece. I can really feel what our feeling.
It's is very sad and personal which is very good, you had to get you feelings out somehow.
But all in all this is very very good.
love you fran!

[Wildecat]

This is a good write, but so sad. Thanks for sharing.

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

Quite an emotional piece. I think you've captured your emotions well, giving the reader a taste of your inner self. Well done!

[C.J.]

wow so sad very good write.