London Bridge Up in Flames

This is one stanza...I thought about this after watching Kuroshitsuji....

London bridge is burning, is bursting in flames

Bodies pile and rot, while families flee

Washing away impurity, washed away in the Thames

The children are silent,while I drink my tea

My fairest lady, my dear lady, swim

The relatives no longer need your love

Swim until the moonlight grows dim

And the sardonic angels take you above

Reviews

[Bluefire]

This is amazing! I love it!
And I see Akashi has thought of "The London Bridge it Falling Down" too xD
Well done!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much! :D

[Bluefire]

You're welcome! ^^

[Akashi]

"London Bridges falling down, falling down, falling down- London Bridges falling down........" I love it , good job on this one. :D You made me laugh.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much!!! (It wasn't supposed to be funny.) :)

[Akashi]

Oh. Well sorry.

[Kuro]

Love it. Just amazing. ^_^

[Chidoriflower]

Hee hee hee. :) Thanks!! :D

[Michael X]

treacherous waters have a way of drowning victims who are not strong enough to swim, this poem reminds me of the death or even suicide of a happy ending, sometimes, even the best things in life have a way of letting a person down,
great job on this!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Swim until the moonlight grows dim
And the sardonic angels take you above.
My faves in this nice poem...:)

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. I'll visit from time to time...:)

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I sense the agony of love grown cold. Love witheld. Woefull write. Well worded to carry the reader through a dark place. You have a nack for the darkness.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, I appreciate your review.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

You are welcome. I have enjoyed all of your work. Look forward to reading more when time permits.