Hey

I was inspired by that Vine song, Idk what the title is though or who the artist is

Hey, how you doing?

Well I'm doing just fine

I lied, I'm dying inside

Hello, how are you?

I'm pretty good

Kidding, I'm dead but don't want to be rude

Yo, wassup

I'm dope af

That's a lie, I'm stuck in a mental rut

Hey, good morning

I'm bright as the sun outside

I'm joking there's a clot in my mind

Hey, sometimes I just want to actually be ok

But no one ever really showed me how

I'm too busy pretending to be happy

For the sake of social convention I'll smile

Dying and crying inside all the while

I just want to go home and hide

Where I feel kind of alright

So hey, how you doin?

Well I'm doing just fine

I'm lying I'm dying inside~

Author's Note

There's always fluffy animals to cuddle.

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

That ever present smile we are always flashing to each other.... I find it disturbing. A mask. We smile at each other automatically, as a formality. There is often nothing there, or something very different.

Humans love to lie with non verbal expression. It's what being in public is all about as far as I'm concerned.

[Chidoriflower]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gyi3N-y-GM4

[Warrior]

This is something that happens to people a lot of people. They smile on the outside but in the inside they are really dying and suffering, scared to tell someone or they don't think anyone will listen. It's sad, because like I said it happens to people. I like how you use contradicting lines such as one line everything is fine and then you do the opposite by showing that everything isn't. And we do not know what people are going through they may smile but in the inside they are hurt. Good work,

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you for the review, it's very insightful. It's just my point so thank you. God bless

[Chidoriflower]

I mean you hit it right on the nail lol