Taken by Force

Taken by Force

A Poem by Chilson, Joshua
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This poem is about a father losing his child only he didn't know till it was all to late.

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 Dear Child,
never born,
taken away,
by mans scorn.

 Three years,
come and go,
could be walking,
crying for mom.

 Truly sorry,
I wasn't there,
to protect you,
when he was there.

 A father,
could have been,
feelings falter,
I'm out he's in.

 This poem,
all so true,
from your dad,
let this reach you.

© 2011 Chilson, Joshua


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So sad.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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Wow! All I can say is sad. This is a raw display of a father's emotions for his child, and the helplessness that father feels not being able to be there. Great emotion!

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beautiful and sad poem..

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Added on September 1, 2010
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Tags: Unborn, Sadness, Sorry
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Chilson, Joshua
Chilson, Joshua

Carlisle, PA



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I write poetry from life experience, though most won't seem that way as I never get into specifics to the events that bring about my work. I'm a silent individual for the most part which doesn't ma.. more..

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