Together at Last

my friends fantasies

My heart pounds when I see your eyes,

You take my hand and my face heats,

Then you drop down on one knee,

A bov pulled from behind your back,

Joy lights my eyes,

I remeber when we were kids,

How you said we'd get married one day,

It seemed like only a dream at the time,

Then you spoke the famous words,

"Will you marry me?",

I sang yes.

As I spun around,

My dreams have come true,

It'll always be me and you,

Now and forver,

Together at last.

Author's Note

not my best...again for my friend, so sydney I hope you like it!

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

Ah, playful and light, almost like a dream. A simple and sweet poem. Great write.

[Jean]

Nice choice of words. :) Like 'sang' rather than 'said' It completely changes the image it gives the reader which is wonderful.

This is a sweet little poem. :) Good work!

[deeps]

This is wonderful and beautiful

[-TweetyBirdd.!-]

i do like it(: haha. great poem! :D