Going insane

Going insane

A Poem by Chloeldobson

Hush now,
don't tell,
but i think i'm going insane.
Breath by breath,
my mind no longer remains.
Can't handle people, 
not you, nor i,
can't handle words,
not hello, or goodbye.
Scared of rejection,
frightened of the truth,
Maybe terrified of your reactions, 
or maybe i'm just scared of you.
Even maybe i'm just scared of losing,
in why i'm going insane,
afraid to lose you,
afraid to lose it,
but now, i'm just losing my sane,
soon, you'll do the same.

© 2012 Chloeldobson


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God asked Jonah to go to Nineveh and help in God's cause. Jonah turned away from god and went his own way. The word ' Nineveh ' in the old Semitic may refer to memories. Look to your memories for the answer. Understand the order of it. Insanity means ' disorder.' Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Dark emotions expressed here. But there's a powerful saying, "Insanity is being unaware that anything's wrong" or something like that :P This must have been a challenging write for you, the content ensconces the most fragile and self-deprecating chasms of the human mind. You expressed it well here. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is totally and utterly amazing. I love this!

~Destiny

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

God asked Jonah to go to Nineveh and help in God's cause. Jonah turned away from god and went his own way. The word ' Nineveh ' in the old Semitic may refer to memories. Look to your memories for the answer. Understand the order of it. Insanity means ' disorder.' Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chloeldobson
Chloeldobson

Cambridge, United Kingdom



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