Girl in my mirror (Edit for 'Poetry slam')

Me and Eliza Bernal won a poetry slam thing today, using an edit of my poem 'Girl in my mirror.' We are performing at the 'Strawberry fair poetry slam' with it!:)

There's a girl in my mirror,

looking back at me,

tonight she looks so sad,

that's all that i can see.

S**t, gay, twat, f*g.

Cow, emo, f*****g slag.

Goth, b***h, loner, queer,

that's all that she can hear.

Not smart enough,

not talented enough,

not normal enough,

not skinny enough.

Not pretty enough,

not nice enough,

not perfect enough.

Never enough.

And that is all that i can see,

the girl in the mirror, is me. 

Author's Note

Anyways to improve are welcome.