W***e.

He didnt pull off that tshirt

to get a better look at your heart.

Don't bother putting on that lovely layer of lipgloss

He'll peel it off in seconds

They say to only shave above the knee

When your expecting company.

Are you expecting a housefull, tonight?

Will they be staying for dinner,

or have you been filled enough today?

I will not pay more taxes

so medicare can support your baby.

Who put toejam on your toast?

Who pissed in your bed?

Did daddy not love you enough, today?

put your clothes back on,

 

 

 

and stay the f**k away from my boyfriend.

 

Author's Note

broken friendships lead to trashtalking. =]

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

man. i wasnt expecting the last part
"and stay the f**k away from my boyfriend."
that part really f*****g got me.
LOVE IT!

[Suki]

IM SORRY THAT YOU'D HAVE TO WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS BECAUSE IM IN A SIMILAIR SITUATION AND I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL. IT SUCKS. IM ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES : D

COULDN'T BE EXPRESSED MORE CLEARLY:
"and stay the f**k away from my boyfriend."

ME LIKE : P

[CLUTZ]

"and stay the f**k away from my boyfriend" i know i shouldn't find that funny but i do. i've never heard someone described like this. very nice, not what i expected, but i like.

[The Mad Prophet]

Wow, different. The feeling of being used? I wouldn't know, no one use's me. Takes advantage, but does not use me. However I like this poem, it has a flow that interest me. Very well done.

[dorkfish]

i love your poetry, your topics and your way of portraying the emotion and situations, its all so wondefuly done.

[Dug]

They say to only shave above the knee
When your expecting company.
Are you expecting a housefull, tonight?

That was priceless.

[Kerri[pollutes]]

bahahahhahaaaa
trashtalking turned into a poem is very nice

[Hedra Helix]

first 8 lines are f*****g tight, unlike this girl. bwaa haa. Im not really mean.

[Legion]

Yea, no doubt. Did she read this? What a piece. Very brutal and honest. I like that.