Daddy vs. His Little Girl

I had a fight with someone. Our personalities always clash and I'm tired of it.

The mask of defiance drapes over the windows to my heart,

Wherein truly lies a volcano of anger and blood and pain;

 

Such ignorant hatred--the home from which I wish to depart--

Tries to disolve the acid that sizzles upon waves of red, falling as rain;

 

As the avalanche crumbles, I find shelter towards which I always dart,

As the smoldering explodes out onto lines, leaving a sheen film of insane...

 

The meteorites crash and I fold over in terror

Succumbing completely to my fears

I realize in vain: There is no place like home.

 

The mask of tranquility and ignorance and bliss, such beautiful stain glass

Shatter into shards that pierce the source of all feeling and question the reason: Why?

Author's Note

I don't know. I've never written anything like this. Please. Suggestions.
(What about the new title?)

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Such an intense write....................I love it!

[Haifa]

It is different, but its a good poem. For the suggestions, I don't know but I think you can use another title for the poem but sure its up to you. Well done.