Here Without You

Why did you go

and leave me here alone?

I know why you left.

I wish you hadn't.

I miss your kiss

and your touch

and your comforting presence.

I hate it, you know.

Being here without you.

Reviews

[khalid]

very simple but feelings are flooding out of it. i like how you used the simple words with all the music coming out in every line of it..

[SlightlyOdd]

I Like it but your poem are simple which is a good thing in some cases but i would like to see you elaborate and some of them

[Pritesh]

Greatly done!keep it up!