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You Healed my Heart

You Healed my Heart

A Poem by T. L. O'Neal

You Healed My Heart

Written by: T. L. O’Neal

 

You came along at the right time

When my heart was broken in two

You took your love and compassion

And the pain in my heart you withdrew

 

You did this for no other reason

Than to mend a broken heart

But after that my love for you

Nothing could tear us apart

 

I don’t know if I was worthy

To accept your loving ways

You were always good to me

And for this I have only praise

 

You make me so happy

This is very plain to see

You loved unconditionally

And loved me for me

 

You gave passion back to me

And made me feel like a man

With your loving gentle touch

From your silky smooth hand

 

Like a gentle cool breeze

Turning my embers to fire

You returned my passion

And restored my desire

 

Now it has been almost ten months

And everyday seems new

I want to repay you with my love

Because you took away the blue

 


© 2008 T. L. O'Neal



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A really beautiful poem, T. I love the strength and conviction of all you say. "Nothing could tear us apart", "unconditional love", "made me feel like a man", it's a relationship at its best. "I don't know if I was worthy - To accept your loving ways - You were always good to me - And for this I have only praise". It's just so sweet it makes me want to cry! Sounds like you guys are lucky to have found each other. Beautiful poetry on both pages for your birthday. There is no better gift in the world than true love from someone's heart!



Posted 9 Years Ago


9 of 9 people found this review constructive.




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What a lovely way to say I love you....The woman that this was written for was the luckiest woman in the world....It sounds as if the relationship was passionate and beautiful......What a joy to read....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel just like this poem. keep up the good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh My Goodness! You are a wonderful Poet.
I really like your style. You have an amazing talent!
Your words are wonderful and they are touching.


Posted 7 Years Ago


took away the blue .. love the thought .. take care , T.

xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Gives me some hope. My current girlfriends mostly incapable of an intimate relationship
due to a barbaric past and alcoholism and is so cool in every other way. She's getting help and I'm hanging
in there for me and her. First time it wasn't me that sent a woman into a depression.
Throw it near the stump for the good ones,
Jack

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

that's really sweet :) nice job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A rally beautiful poem. Makes me wish I could find a woman and have a relationship like this...Truly unconditional. The poem is powerful, smooth and heartfelt. What a catch....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Such love is to be treasured for sure! As the story goes, if someone tried to give everything they had to obtain love, it would not be there. It is a true gift, something that can never be bought. Your precious poem really is touching and tender. A grateful, appealing write, right from the heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely rythmn. And complete in meaning.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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T. L. O'Neal
T. L. O'Neal

In the sticks, NC



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I started writing as a way to work out my feelings and found that I enjoyed it very much. I enjoy humor and feel that you can find it in most things, even though it may be hard to find at the moment. .. more..

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