Million of lies

...a sip of the

Sip of the bottle
A blade to the wrist she doing mighty fine but we all know it million of lies.
She has blood shot eyes from all the tears she cried.
She told me she was going be okay but we all know it million of lies.
She a broken soul with no care in the world.
Everyone doesn't see what I see in a million colors.
She so beautiful but her heart is turning black and blue.
She hates herself everyday for letting that feeling get to her again.
And she tells herself she won't do it one more time.
But we all know it million of lies.
She a damage soul and only she knows.
What she is feeling..
She remember all her memories that followed her to the point of hurting
She sat there and watched everything fade away just like her smile.
Now she breaks and with every heartache becomes tears.
And with every tear become pain.
And with all the pain becomes blood.
And with all the blood becomes a bottle.
And the girl looking in the mirror is you or I.

Reviews

[Leah Saxey]

Souls are too beautiful to hurt themselves when when we love so kindly. Memories and experiences hurt enough. One shouldn't have to hurt themselves when one has such great potential.

[PokemonFan#1]

This is a very well written poem and while I read it, it had an accent (Western? I can't recall the name).
It is a very deep poem as well. I feel I can almost relate to this.

[Coyote Poetry]

"She remember all her memories that followed her to the point of hurting
She sat there and watched everything fade away just like her smile.
Now she breaks and with every heartache becomes tears."
A very strong poem. It was a emotional ride in your poem. I like the above lines. Old memories do become tears. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote'