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A Poem by Chris38
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Wanting what you can' t have

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A worshipping glance was cast
at you when you didn't notice
carefully, taking care
that your life didn't change

© 2011 Chris38



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When looking at perfection...we do not wish to change one thiing about t...do we ??love and God bless..Kathie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The wanting of someone yet afraid to take the risk. That's a real troubling place to be. I really like this piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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I believe you are taking about Jesus. Some people love him while other don't.

Posted 2 Years Ago


There's something so beautiful in simplicity that you seem to capture so well with your poems. Fantastic work

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chris38
Chris38

Liverpool, North west England, United Kingdom



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I am 38 years old and work in the care industry with adults with learning difficulties. I have been writing on and off since I was six years old. I had some stuff published when I was in my teens but .. more..

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