Who Are You?

Sometimes the greatest enemy is yourself

Why do you keep haunting me?
I don't even know who you are
Are you a ghost from the future or a ghost from the past?
You're my shadow in the bright sunlight, you're a  sillhouette in the night
You're my mirror in the morning and my nightmare at night
You know my every thought and anticipate each move
I think you want to kill me but your love for me prevents it
I reach out to touch you but you're never there
I hear your laughter of relief at the dawn and your crying in the night
You've touched my heart in so many ways yet you've tasted it's blood

Reviews

[Valentine]

Deep thought provoking write..I did not think you had this in you,,you are growing as a writer sweetie..Katihe

[Calypso]

For me this translate into the story of a bit of our personally. Well written.

[Tina Kline]

So true, so true. This is very dark and intense but like you say, the greatest battles we ever fight are with ourselves. Very nicely done.

[Silver_Moon]

This is really nice, Chris. This is so true. Our greatest enemy is really ourselves, sad to say.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

WoW! this is superpurb Really to the point I have been there with one we know well,