Now

Now

A Poem by Patrick Ramsey
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Reflection on perspective

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Life is now.

Yesterday has passed.

Tomorrow isn’t.

 

Life is experiencing.

Yesterday is memory.

Tomorrow is hope or dread.

 

Now I sense, show, manifest, receive.

Yesterday I worked and wasted.

Tomorrow I destroy my hope for the future.

 

Experience is how I perceive it.

Yesterday I’ve remember differently than it was, again and again.

Tomorrow, my expectations will be lost, experiences felt, and past created. 

 

Is now what I want?

How do I make now happy?

How do I make past and future less present in now?

© 2017 Patrick Ramsey


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This is a very thought provoking poem Patrick. Past, present and future covers most of life. It occurred to me that I got a feeling of having been counseled after reading this but it struck me that your future hopes are quite negative. My own favourite poem that i keep coming back to is to a mouse by our Scottish poet Robert burns - the best laid plans 'of mice and men' gang aft agley (astray) - i guess Steinbeck liked it!
All the best,
Alan

Posted 3 Years Ago


I do think that when you are in the 'present moment' you don't worry about the past or future. I suppose what it actually means, is, when you are actively engaged with what you are doing ( even meditating or resting) your mind is fully occupied. I think you are right - 'Now I sense, show, manifest, receive.' ie. being 'aware'. But I do like to go back to my memories. With a little bit of analysis and understanding it is possible to make even the worst ones into a learning experience. As you say, 'Life is experiencing'. But I think you may be a bit wrong about your tomorrow . 'Tomorrow I destroy my hope for the future.' Well, yes, in a sense, but thank goodness we don't know what the heck will happen tomorrow! My goodness, you wonderful philosophical poem, got me rattling on! I hope your 'now' becomes more and more happy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Life is experiencing.
Yesterday is memory.
Tomorrow is hope or dread.


Beautiful lines with deep truth

Posted 6 Years Ago


We can only live in the present and hope for the best in the future..yet so many still get stuck in the past..not capable of letting go ..well expressed piece here..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Patrick Ramsey

6 Years Ago

Thank you Fran!

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Patrick Ramsey
Patrick Ramsey

Midland, TX



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