Come

Come, Let us go for a walk
Let us hold hands
Let us link our arms together

Come, Let me pull you closer
Let me protect you from the cold night
Let me wrap my arms around you

Come, Let yourself fall into me
Let yourself trust once more
Let yourself be comforted

Come, Let us go for a walk
Let us hold hands
Let us give into each other

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Short but says allot.
Its so romantic and beautiful.
Also sounds very poetic, how you repeat the same word/line.
Really sweet write.
I enjoyed reading it.
Keep writing :)

[Christa]

I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Anytime :)

[Jamie]

A beautiful piece really enjoyed reading this :)

[Christa]

Knowing you enjoyed it, makes me smile :)

[Jamie]

Aww :) *big smile!*

[Sami Khalil]

The gift of love in your simple but impat_full words. You have a great perspective...Excellent...:).....

[Christa]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[Mai L Nissen]

I like the simplicity of the form. It gives it a feel of someone who is not afraid to love without shielding oneself behind games. There is a certainty that I like :)

[Christa]

Love in it's simplest form is a blessing from heaven. When there are no games, hearts can soar. Thank you for your kind words :)

[....................]

To love, to be loved and to need and to be needed - what else can we ask for? I enjoyed this piece.

FT

[Christa]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

simple things often have the greatest impact, that's what i believe.
your poem proves that!!
simple emotions......simple words.........eternal love!!!
i loved it!!!!
:)

[Christa]

Thank you so very much! Your words are much appreciated :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

A simple yet profound poem. Not everyone loves spontaneously, particularly if past hurts caused romantic limbo.....I also detect a selflessness......the writer is not concerned with what he / she needs, but only what is needed by the loved one. The lack of rhyme in this poem makes it more raw......more real, more honest, because rhyme may sound forced at times, particularly if one is trying to reach out to someone who possibly is in pain........A very sensitive and heartfelt poem!

[Christa]

Passion, love, is sometimes not something you can put within the parameters of a rhyme. Thank you for your kind words.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

It's great to be with that you love, It's the great gift, nice poem

[Christa]

Thank you :)