working haiku

working haiku

A Poem by Christel Grady

 

Sleeping peacefully

Not aware that I am here

Dreaming while awake

© 2008 Christel Grady


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Capturing perfect form, to me this reads just as a limerick haiku should,
the depth is intriguing and the balancing contrast add feature to ponder,
christal, you have a great way of defining the essence in mind and heart.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the scope of thought in subtle grasping


Posted 15 Years Ago


On it's own I adored this haiku but added to the hillarious picture I had to giggle a little. Daydreaming is a common pasttime for all writers I'm sure so great choice of topic.

Good luck in the True Talent contest, I'll be announcing winners shortly.

Sparrow

Posted 15 Years Ago


i like! know the feeling...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreaming- unfortunately that was my favorite pastime at school. I enjoyed ... and smiled... :+)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is too cute and the photo is so funny. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dreaming and living. I like the roundness of it all.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

lol... the photo was funny

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You've been spying on me at work!! LOL This is how I spend most of my life--at work, at home, at the supermarket.... ah yes. The curse of a writer is being trapped inside one's own imagination, and the only exits lead to new plot lines but never to the real world... Did I say curse? Actually sounds better than reality!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is great.
That photo is funny. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Christel Grady

Portland, OR



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