this time

this time

A Poem by Christel Grady
"

for Stefan

"

gone

 

but never forgotten

 

i tried

 

to find you

 

inside my mind

 

my dirty hands

 

heart full of nothing

 

i missed something

 

© 2008 Christel Grady


Author's Note

Christel Grady
still processing.......dreaming of you

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very short, but very direct. great poem.

-mike kerr-

Posted 10 Years Ago


For whatever reason sometimes things just don't work out. You can put your heart and soul into a relationship and poof it's gone. At least that's the feeling I got from reading this. You try to bring it back but it's gone and the longing is still there; along with the questions of why it didn't work that can torture you. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

short sweet and to the point. A nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You really put so much emotion in so few words... I can feel you missing someone and yet feeling it is your fault they are gone... really great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Your words have underlining sentimental effect, imo, explains what it means
to remember someone very close but unable to communicate what feelings surface
to that specific indivisual, but in thought, in dreams, but knowing they will
always remain special and will never be forgotten until perhaps met again,
Christel, this is beautiful and has heartwrenching effect, draws the reader
to ponder what it means to miss those who've come and gone in life,
were able to leave an endearing impression that will remain their legacy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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Christel Grady

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