Last Moments

Your breath staggered,

voice cracking with your last words,

pulse slowing as your heart gives in,

eyes growing heavy with tiredness,

face getting lighter with every passing minute,

eyes full of pain and sorrw,

the last tear before you go,

ans a second to say,

I love you...Good bye

Reviews

[LivingDeath]

Please dont do anything you will regret.. PLEASE

[jhed]

full of emotions..this is good!

[Missing Part]

thanx

[Ron Reardon]

Sounds pretty sad. You write your emotion well!