What Was

The feeling being so happy with the person I gave my heart to, the caring words that I live by even in the ever so difficult times, when I feel like giving up I look back and I remember what we shared and what was said I cant bring myself to do it, I remember the sweet voice of what seemed so close; that is now so far, the bleeding stopped when I felt the love that no-one would be able return, it killed me ever time that look came across that beautiful face that is no longer seen in my eyes, the one I relied  on to get me through, but I am and will always be grateful for what we shared.

 

Reviews

[Rayne]

This peom has a very depressing sound to it. Over all it is very good I do not see any errors at all. The person you are talking about must have been very important to you. I like the peom very much.

[Missing Part]

No I help wreck it.

[LivingDeath]

And to you also.. You helped me through the toughest part of my life. If it wasnt for you, I would be 6 feet under right now. So thankyou, I will always be here for you, when ever you need me.