Moving Forward

Moving Forward

A Poem by Missing Part

 

I try so hard to look forward but how do you move forward when you scared that you not ready.

 

When it feels like it would be better to just hold on to what you have and hope it’s good enough.

 

Even though you know full well that you have to move forward for it to get better and for things to change.

 

But how do you know it will get better? How do you know what lies ahead for you? You don’t but the only way to figure it out is to move forward.

 

And that’s what I’m doing.

© 2010 Missing Part


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I like this and as others have said before me moving forward is hard and unfortunatly it's something that we all have to find our own way to move on. But yeah your poem, I really liked it but think you may have used a bit too much enjambment.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is hard to accept the part we must move on and leave something behind us. The poem is very good. I like the ending. It is difficult to leave a good memory on the road of life. A outstanding poem.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


moving forward can be hard at times, i can relate. there are always reasons why we are afraid to move forward, but its the best thing we can do, so we wont hurt anymore, this is a great write

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is really touching, beautiful poem, I love it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very well-written. I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


im glad your moving forward

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Missing Part
Missing Part

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