Between the Words

LET

Something break

US

Apart from nature's wonders.

RUN

To an unforgivable place

ON

The brink of extinction.

AN

Undeniable series of events,

INFINITE

Thrills leading us on this devastating

JOURNEY

To a new world.

Author's Note

Just a quick note: there is a reason for those certain words to be capitalized. Read them by theirselves. Thanks for checking this out! :)

Reviews

[Rashmi Kulal]

Brilliant!

[Coyote Poetry]

Interesting set-up of the poem. I like the purpose of the poem. I hope there can be another place for us to land one day. A entertaining poem.
Coyote

[Jared]

I like how you set that up like 2 messages in one good job

[Bridgette's Ink]

Wow, that was breath-taking. You have this way to your writing that makes it seem so effortless, despite the depth and emotion you put behind it. This also has a really peculiar style to it that I really admire. Amazing poem.

[steppenwolf]

This is very, very good. Full of the kind of rapture that only a poem can express.

Steppenwolf.

[Caitlin Lea]

I am a sucker for "hidden" messages. Many kudos for that! Nice little piece altogether. :)

[N!LoC]

oooo a hidden davinci code eh! very very nice!!! c'mon lets run then ! hihi

[Sean]

I love the idea of having used capitalised font to form a poem within a poem. Well done! I liked your message. Very interesting. It's a question I ask myself sometimes.

[Sami Khalil]

Very artistic.

[Christoph Poe]

Thank you! So I noticed you are from Tuscaloosa, or is it you just live in Tuscaloosa now? (Feel free to message me if you'd like.)

Thanks again!
--Chris

[Sami Khalil]

My lady is from Tuscaloosa Al. We moved from Houston Tx to be close to her family. I will if I need something. You are welcome. Originally from Lebanon . Lebanese American citizen. The land of Gibran Khalil

[RJ620Win]

great job!

[Christoph Poe]

Thanks! :)

[RJ620Win]

no problem