Dear you, From me

A poem i should rip up and tear apart but wont because it shows what a stupid thin i did for someone and told them. Then was left in the dark

Dear You,

               I’ve never heard words like this spoken to me before. Every time I think about them my heart beats a little faster. We can’t move to fast but I hope we can make something last.I’ll understand if you want to pass but my heart might shatter like glass. My soul would slowly turn to ash. But until then lets have a blast. There’s so much more I want to say. But until I find a better way this is where this letter stays.

 

                                    From,

         Me

Author's Note

Good or bad if its bad i'll delete it and never think of it again. I'm working on the second part of it now that is going to be longer and more angry. :)

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your thoughts flow like a river, filled with imagery of life and friendship.. things that last.. I appreciate you sharing with us, and for your honesty in your voice..

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Cheyenne,

An adorable innocent little poem that has a lot to say in so few words. An excellent write that showcases a good understanding of flow and word use. You can expand on this if you want, but its good the way it is.

Regards,

Matthew

[Coyote Poetry]

I have many letters that no-one had read. In life sometime better to write the words down and sometime we feel better and find a way to fix the problems. A nice letter. Words are a two-sided blade. Can make us cry or be overjoy with happiness.
Coyote

[SimplyDisastrous]

Very nice flowing poem (:

[deeps]

if you want to pass but my heart might shatter like glass. My soul would slowly turn to ash. But until then lets have a blast.

Love these lines, this is very well expressed feelings.
I enjoyed reading this but seems sad.