Feeling

I feel like I wasn't given a chance

To show you what could have been

You ran to comfortable arms

Is that all you know?

I don't see what you see

I don't feel what you feel for her

I want you for myself

A chance for something good

Warm hands

smiles

beds

feelings

Feeling something again

I want to feel something again

I want to feel someone again

 

I want to feel you.

 

Reviews

[Kelly Lynch]

the repetition at the end is very effective. I enjoyed this.

[kbob]

Not a bad write. great job!

[....]

This is so wonderful
and touching, well
written.

[Silent Mystery]

it's nice alot of passion in your words in this poem you should continue to add more.

[Ian]

It's good. Keep adding stuff! =)