Drowning

Drowning

A Poem by Cierra Scott
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Whew! Been a while!

"

I can't breathe,

I can hardly see.

My tears are blocking my sight,

I feel like I'm drowning.

 

I've cried so much,

I'm drowning in my own sea.

My heart is pounding,

And I close my eyes to give up.

 

You wont let me,

You're keeping me alive.

You pull out,

and breathe your life into me.

 

I slowly awaken,

To find myself in your embrace.

Just when I thought you gave up,

You've once again amazed me.

 

True Love;

It comes to those who don't give up.

True Love;

It comes to those who will make it through even the toughest situations.

© 2010 Cierra Scott


Author's Note

Cierra Scott
Whew... been a while, huh guys? lol. Well, I wrote this because I hadn't written something in a long while. I hope you guys enjoy this!

Another love poem.

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Interesting. I'm not a "true love" person, especially when it comes to high school, but it's a good piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very interesting. I like the whole theme :))
keep up the good work,
Yours truly, Rose ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Starts out dark, but ends happy.
I like it!
Nice piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2010
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Cierra Scott
Cierra Scott

Fredericksburg, VA



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I love to write poetry and stories. :) Music is my world! Lol... Age: 16 Highschool Student more..

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