Caught In a Blank Stare

Weird point, not too sure what to say about it. Thought it was a good line...

I lost my thought this morning

My mind is bland to no extent

As I'm home alone

 

I can see all the pictures

of the happiness before I lost my nerve

and I wont answer my phone

 

Cause I'm caught in a blank stare

And I don't want to remember

the thoughts of you and

the thoughts of me

cause I'll never be happy

 

When I'm caught in a blank stare

I'll never remember

the past six weeks

when my knees were weak

I never want to speak...

to you again

 

My heart was ripped open

and my soul had been poured in,

into every little thing I ever did

You shown a side of me that I always had hid

 

Cause I was caught in a blank stare

And I don't want to remember

that our story is over

and so are we

I'll make it all f*****g history

to find my way

Yes, to find my way

Out of this blank stare

Author's Note

There may have been a few spelling problems, just tell me what you think...

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Maybe there were, but the main thing is the pain, agony of your words.. true or not.. you have a way of putting things pretty simply, no flowers and music... and, it all makes sense..

' When I'm caught in a blank stare / I'll never remember / the past six weeks / when my knees were weak /
I never want to speak... / to you again'

tough words, sad words.. so well expressed.. strange how looking into nothing is considered numbing..

thank you for sharing.. sort of know the feeling.

[Dekadin]

I like it. It kinda sucks when stuff like that happens, and the poem captures it well. Anyway I like how it flows even though it doesn't seem to use a standard poetry layout.

It's very simple but it flows really well. I really like the "caught in a blank stare" parts.