Removed

The words are lost 

on the tip of my tongue.

At a loss for words

I find them crowding inside my head.

My thoughts take off like fireworks

Spiraling and firing in my mind's cavity,

Impervious to all of my control,

yielding only to yours. 

How do I convey to you

this light show of my mind?

And know for sure

That it will be

The most spectacular thing

You've ever seen. 

Reviews

[Juan Santana]

I love your writing.

[. serah .]

. oh gosh ... this is just one of the most beautiful, earnest and heartfelt poems ever written ... IMHO ...