Light

Oh Angels!

Hear my prayer

And grant me the strength

To feel so much

 

This power of empathy

Help me welcome

Accept as a blessing

For the years to come

 

Take away the curse

Cast on with black

That I feel with such darkness

Is weighting my heart

 

When I feel all the misery

Fill me with faith

When buried underground

Let light emerge

 

Lift me to a point

Where there is only love

Irradiate my eyes with sparkle

From the beauty above

 

Help me connect

With the joy that fills this world

And let me forget

Everything that hurts

 

Reviews

[Stephanie S]

wow ur writing is amazing and i am beyond complimented that u took time to read anything i wrote....this was breathtaking and so familiar...a feeling i felt but could never find the words to describe, the way u brought it to life and the imagery paints such a vivid picture... beautiful , loved it

[Dushyant Thadani]

This is one amazing write... This prayer is just so heart felt, and so beautiful... It was something I needed to read... Great job...

[Akshat♥]

this is a type of prayer..
really nice..
i liked reading this work of yours
so different..and interesting..
it really catch my eyes..
nice write..going to my favorites :)

[Gomer LePoet]

nicely done Cliare. pain in small doses keeps us grounded to reality. pain in large doses will keep us just grounded from life. thanks for sharing

[Crow]

lovely, a truly spiritual piece

[David W Moore III]

This is a beautiful prayer. Lyrical and deep. Very nice.

[XxKooperxX]

you've made a beautiful piece of work constructed from your soul... nice work

[hannah]

A nicely constructed poem in the form of a prayer. Touching and expressive, it shows your steadfast belief in angels.

[Voice]

Very beautiful poem. I really love this and i can relate very much so to the second stanza. Great Write!!

Voice

[KatiePie]

The flow of this is brilliant. Like a prayer being whispered and the ending couldn't be more perfect. Thank you for sharing.