Finding the light

Finding the light

A Poem by Elwina

Sometimes I fall into a hole

And it’s not about getting out

It is about finding the light inside


© 2011 Elwina



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Your words have illumined my eyes. Very cool.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, simple and amazing. This has a fully true message. Great job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a short interesting poem. You have to fall down to find inspiration to get up.
Nice work. I like how you get your point across

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

says so much in a wee little verse! good work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem about looking on the positive. Everyone should take this message to heart, especially when they're going through a hard time. Very inspirational.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mhhh.hope the way am thinkin is what you meant.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Lovely darling, that's exactly how I am feeling today.

I think if you wrote more of these short pieces, it will fine-tune the kinds of thing your creativity is meant to say. Bravo!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice... I wish if you wold have added one more stanza at least... but the message is very good.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True wisdom in the poem. Must find the light and the way out. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, I thought about the last line and played with "It's about what you find inside" The hole could mean so many things. Good job Claire

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Elwina
Elwina

Belgium



About
My feet are in Europe (most of the time). My dreams take me everywhere. I love to write. It helps me being centered and travelling through my inner world. If you have to read one piece from me, .. more..

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